About Me

Hi, My name is Sam and I am a Year 5 student at Mt Carmel School. I wanted to participate in the Summer Blogging as I was with my mum when Rachel came to talk to her class. I asked my mum if I can join. Finally she agrees and I am very keen to journey through with so many children around New Zealand.

Thursday, March 21, 2013

My Writing Learning Intentions


I am learning to improve in my writing by:-

Identifying the subjects and the predicates in my writing.
Look at the type of verbs in my writing.
Add adverbs to my writing.
Change some verbs into more interesting vocabulary.
Example- I sang horribly at church.
Subject- I
Predicate-Sang horribly at church.
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